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Reviewer: tuckergolden888 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2020 03:53 AM Title: The beginning of the end.

So I forgot if I reviewed on this story or not.

 

It is so good!  I love it. I am so excited to read more.

Reviewer: Nickyanka4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2020 01:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start of a story! I LOVE IT! It's very intriguing and great!

Reviewer: tokyoNova Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2020 03:23 PM Title: The beginning of the end.

"If I would have known that night that I was going to die, maybe I would have stayed just a little bit longer.

If I would have known that night that I was going to die, maybe I would have kissed her just one more time.

If I would have known that night that I was going to die, maybe I would have told my little girl that I loved her more than words could have ever imagine a thousand more times than I already had.

If I would have known that night that I was going to die, maybe I would have just given into Hayden's pleas for me to stay." <-- HOLY. SHIT. Court! What a goddamn suckerpunch to the chest.

I was so enthralled by this prologue that I was whizzing through the chapter so easily, and these lines hit and I had to stop to take in each one, and appreciate it. 

What an idea! I mean, the gang thing is unique in itself for this platform, but the decision to start it with Nick dying? Bravo.

I'm so down for this ride!

- K



Author's Response: Ahhhhh! See this is exactly what I wanted! Iím 100% for the heartbreak and this story will be full of that for sure. I find it crazy that there havenít been that many gang stories (save for a few amazing ones) on the site! This one is going to be a doozy and full of betrayal all around. Hoping to have everyone sobbing by the end of it haha! Thanks again for the review pretty lady!! Also.. update relapse.. Iím dying haha Xoxo court

Reviewer: lisavslisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2020 02:31 AM Title: The beginning of the end.

This is soooo sad already! But I love a good crime fic! This is what got me - “I love you. Big house, five kids. I promise you.” Ugh. <3 And then it progressively got more sad. But I love it so far! <3



Author's Response: Haha thanks babe! Iíve come to the realization that I usually break peoples hearts with my writing and this story is no different haha is Iíll hopefully have the first chapter up this week!!

Reviewer: tuckergolden888 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2020 05:25 PM Title: The beginning of the end.

I love this story so much!  It is so good! I am so excited for this story.



Author's Response: Thank you lovely!!!

Reviewer: BlackGirlLit Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2020 08:06 AM Title: The beginning of the end.

I am literally so excited I can't even begin to tell you!! AHHHHHH!!!! So good and can't wait until you update!



Author's Response: Thank you lovely!!! Hopefully have the first chapter up sometime this week!!

Reviewer: jocelynyvette Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2020 07:35 AM Title: The beginning of the end.

Oh my god this is amazing! I can't wait to see what you have in store for this!!! I'm excited and although it'll be painful to wait for updates I definitely understand that life gets busy and we don't always have time to update. But I'm definitely keeping this bookmarked!



Author's Response: Ahhhh! Thank you lovely! I wanna try and go maybe one chapter a week then Iím not rushing and putting out something I hate, I want everything to tie into the rest so Iím being very careful with this one! Iím glad youíre interested! Hopefully I can keep up the hype ahha

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