



[Report This]Date: February 24, 2009 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
i really like this. write more soon!
btw, i'm glad ur dad is home :)




[Report This]Date: February 12, 2009 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
How, is it possible, that this only has three reviews? This is entriguing and very interesting! Seriously, you should look back at this story. Just consider it!




[Report This]Date: November 14, 2008 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I totally know how you feel and how the characters in the story feel. My dad has been in the Military for 11 years already. He has 9 more to go. Everytime he goes overseas I'm afraid that I might never see him again, but then I remember that he is in God's hands and if it's his time to go I just have to trust in God and believe that there is good that will come out of all of this.
Steph




[Report This]Date: October 25, 2008 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
the first chapter was emtional. the second.. was err.. okay. I still like the story.. I just need more things happening.
Author's Response:
Yeah I agree
I just wanted to keep the story going in chapter 2 though.
Thanks though :D




[Report This]Date: September 22, 2008 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh man, i can seriously only imagine what must be running through their heads at this point.
i'm interested to see how much of a father role Colton's going to take up. also, this is a good change of pace from the Jonas Brothers stories =D
good job so far, i'm excited to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!
It'll definitely be a change of pace for the family...especially Colton.
And I love writing these non-Jonas ffs and reading them because, like you said, it's a good break from the same 4 guys. haha
Again, thanks!




