Reviews For Llywellyn
Reviewer: Ani Lark Signed 
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Date: January 18, 2010 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2010 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I went to check this out when I saw the preview on your Youtube channel. I must say this is very interesting and I'm intrigued.
Reviewer: Pollypocket911 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2009 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: December 19, 2009 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Yup. This story does, in fact, rock hard core :-]
First off, i love the relationship you've created between lance and his sister. Halley is simply hysterically sarcastic and i have a feeling she tends to offend a lot of people haha!
you can tell that they really are one another's best friends. The way halley knew that something was up with her bro because of his eyes was interesting, it shows how well she knows him. Of course, when you move from foster family to foster family, i bet you don't have too much in the way of friends. They are all each other has left, which is sad, but also has made them closer.
So mr. wolf is a kind of a creeper yes? he obviously has a very demanding presence. It's only chapter one and i can't stop thinking about him! i wonder what role he will take in the story: good or EVIL!!
This is great! Cannot wait to see where you take it!
update soon please!
Reviewer: luckythirteen Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thank you sweets! Makes me feel a lot better 'cause I haven't been able to really tell yet what the readers thought (since I don't have many yet). I'll be getting another chapter out soon! MEGS
[Report This]Date: December 18, 2009 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! What's up with the teacher? Why doesn't Lance get headaches? Oh, so many questions. I'm so glad you chose to go with Original Fiction; now that I read it, I can see it really wouldn't work as well if it was JB fiction. It's so good!
Author's Response: Thank you sweets! Makes me feel a lot better 'cause I haven't been able to really tell yet what the readers thought (since I don't have many yet). I'll be getting another chapter out soon! MEGS
Reviewer: erinnovelist Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: December 18, 2009 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
THat. Was. Epic!
Reviewer: ForeverFearless Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: December 18, 2009 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this, you're a very good author and i enjoy all of your stories on here--keep writing and updating them!