Date: 09/19/2020 04:54 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh god that was heartbreaking. My stomach was in a knot the entire time I read this!
I knew he wouldn't take it lightly, but fuck, that was explosive!
Sarah, as always, is the voice of reason. I'm so glad that Shay has her love and support, she really needs it right now.
I know Jake is hurting, but he is creating such a divide within his own family. I don't know how he will be able to redeem himself.
And Joe.. my poor, loving Joe... that hurt. A lot. I'm hoping that there is some Joe happiness in the next chapter, that would be fab 🤣
Fantastic chapter, as always! Can't wait for the next update. I'll go out of my mind waiting for the next one 🤣
Date: 08/23/2020 06:47 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Oh sweet lord...
Ok, their saving grace is just as Joe said... at least she didn't find them 10 mins later when they were in full swing...
Poor Shay, she feels like it's the worst thing that could happen to them. And Poor Joe... he almost seemed relieved that they were caught... he wasn't exactly worried about being caught, more so her reaction?
I love Sarah. She is sweet and caring and definitely reacted much better than either of them could have ever dreamed... Jake on the other hand...
Jakeis definitely going to lose his shit. I can't see him reacting too kindly to his best friend sleeping with his little sister. It's not going to be a happy situation at all...
Ugh poor Joe and Shay... they deserve better. They deserve to be happy and to have all the sex they want!! But who knows(except you, of course 😂😂)... this could be good for them? Maybe?
Gah I loved it so much, can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 08/03/2020 02:46 PM Title: Chapter Ten
So there it is, Shay lost her virginity to Joe, & they said I love you to each other. I loved this chapter so much, thank you for updating :)
I'm glad you liked it! Sorry to keep you waiting all weekend!!
Date: 07/22/2020 12:23 PM Title: Chapter Nine
That was so fecking cute!!!!
I love their relationship! They are sooo cute. I love that Joe cares for her so deeply that he wants to tell everyone about their relationship. I can also see why she does want to keep their relationship a secret because, realistically, people will lose their friggin minds and will definitely try to stop them from seeing each other.
Oooooohhhhh!! Spending the night in his house... I'M SO EXCITED!!!
I can't wait!!!
God, I love them!!
Date: 07/01/2020 06:46 AM Title: Chapter Eight
Oh my goodness, what a perfectly sweet, romantic chapter.
Joe is so sweet, so respectful, so caring... god he's perfect. I love how much he cares for Shay, and always puts her first, while also corrupting her haha.
They're so perfect for each other, young love is so amazing.
This chapter had me beaming from ear to ear, warm, fuzzy and giddy all at once!
I'm not going to lie, I was expecting someone to catch her coming home and for all hell to break loose, but I'm glad it didn't!
I'm eager to read the next chapter, so addicting!
Date: 06/24/2020 07:00 AM Title: Chapter Four
Oh sweet lord. First off that awkward, awkward conversation! And of course Joe had to be there to witness it in all its cringeworthy glory.
Her mom is very sweet, very caring. Let's hope she still feels that way when she finds out that it's Joe that Shay is longing for.
They are so reckless and I love it! He just casually wanders into her bedroom in the middle of the night mere hours after her father's declaration!! He's either brave or stupid!
More of that please!
Date: 06/22/2020 01:17 AM Title: Chapter Seven
Wow so now Shay is on birth control, that just means that her & Joe are gonna take the next step sooner or later ;) good chapter. I feel like you updated just for me & I really appreciate it.
I did update just for you! Haha. I've been so lazy with my updating, so thank you for motivating me! :)))