Date: 07/06/2020 12:15 AM Title: chapter fourteen
I'm glad at least one of her friends finally found out!! Now she won't be so much on edge around all of her friends! I'm glad Joe respected her enough to stop when she wasn't comfortable anymore. I do just love Joe and Avery together! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 06/24/2020 02:51 AM Title: chapter twelve
*sigh* secret kisses in a club. They're SO SWEET! even when they're teasing each other or bantering together and with their friends. Just makes me feel all warm because they're so cute.
But like.. sis. Who are you kidding? You're telling me she's NOT staying in the same bed as him?! Blasphemy!
I wouldn't let that opportunity pass me by, that's all I'm saying lol :P
Neither of them should be able to keep their hands off of one another hahaha. BUT! even if they did, they should still cuddle...in his bed. together.
Lol great chapter!
Date: 06/18/2020 04:13 AM Title: chapter ten
Ugh they're so adorable. I'm actually getting butterflies with some of the things that are coming out of Joe's mouth haha. I want to smush their faces together even more than they've already done haha
I'm so glad that they're past that first awkward stage! I know they've got more hurdles ahead of them, but I can totally tell they're both happy with where things are headed.
I liked the flashback too! Was cool to delve into what Nick and Avery's relationship was before. It was too cute, but made me feel conflicted because obviously we're all for Joe and Avery.
hahahhaa I just wanted Avery and Joe to live in their little bubble forever! But sadly, gotta add in the drama and spice it up! hahhaa but Joe is such a sweet talker isn't he ;)
Writing Nick and Avery used to be almost as fun as Joe and Avery! Their cute puppy love was a sweet time, well, I've imagined a whole thing for them that isn't even written hahaha but anyway!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 06/16/2020 08:43 PM Title: chapter ten
I love Avery and Joe together! I can't wait for their relationship to grow!! I am very curious to know what they're friends and family will say!! Especially Nick!
hahaha they are too cute!! And ooh, Nick finding out ain't gonna be pretty, that's all I'll say! hahaha
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Date: 06/16/2020 01:41 AM Title: chapter ten
I love them so much I just want them to stay in this world and never have to tell anyone about them. Nick and Avery seemed like they were together because that's what felt like the logical next step in their relationship but Joe and Avery belong together.
Ugh if only in a perfect world that was that case! Hahaha we'll learn more about Nick and Avery soon ;)
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Date: 06/12/2020 09:42 PM Title: chapter eight
They're so cute. And pretty relatable. First dates are so awkward for me, so this hit me deep haha
I do like that she didn't just jump right into kissing on the first date. I know she says she's over Nick, but still... I want to see their relationship grow and blossom before she makes a decision about that. Plus I know when it happens it's going to be hot haha
Date: 06/12/2020 09:32 PM Title: chapter seven
At least she's admitting the feelings to herself. It'd be sooo much more frustrating if she was in denial. I'm glad they're going on the date though!! They're so cute, and I know it's weird because of Nick, but... this needs to happen.
I mean, I feel like it's a long time coming for Joe ;) maybe less for Avery, but Joe deserves this chance
Date: 06/12/2020 09:08 PM Title: chapter six
OKay Joe talking to Winston about Avery is really adorable. I have a very large soft spot for dogs (as I'm sure a lot - A LOT - of people do), but it's just so sweet to think of a guy like Joe at this time talking all sweet like that to him.
Also, holy shit, but i may have kind of forgotten about Winston? I feel like a terrible fan. What happened to the poor lump? Oh man, now I'm getting sad haha
Date: 06/12/2020 08:47 PM Title: chapter four
Avery was a bit bitter with her friends, but i think we all get like that sometimes... especially when things in our life aren't so peachy... like just breaking up with your boyfriend haha
I remember Beacher's being like a thing for this Jonas all those years back, so again, I enjoy reading about it in this story because it's more realistic!
Date: 06/12/2020 08:32 PM Title: chapter two
He's so sweet. Like everytime she lets him down, he's just automatically like "next time, though?" and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy lol
Also, I remember how much I really liked how realistic you made this... like the places they go and what they do. I could totally picture Joe (years back) going and doing these things! And I'm sure he did, because it sounds like you did your research/just knew lol
Date: 05/27/2020 12:45 AM Title: chapter three
Joe is so cute in this and the tension you create between them- so good!!!!
Hahaha he's quite adorable :) I honestly wonder how I used to be able to write like this lmaooo
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 05/27/2020 12:16 AM Title: chapter one
Omg yes. I missed this story! How you captured the heart break and the cute moment of Avery and Joe talking! Gahhhhh, so good!!!!!!
Awww I'm glad you're back and loving it again! hahaha I did miss Joe and Avery. They were pretty cute.
Thanks for reviewing! :)