Date: 06/29/2020 05:16 AM Title: Part Five: What do you want?
awwwww im so sad this story is over but loved how it ended. (especially the part with joe being like "i can be your boyfriend") it also reminded me of that scene with logan and rory from gilmore girls when he agrees to be her boyfriend after she tells him that shes done being in a casual relationship with him
also i know the story is over but will there be an epilogue or something? would love to see how their friends react to them finally officially being together (and i'm also curious to see how they're doing as an 'official couple'!)
Date: 06/20/2020 07:55 AM Title: Part Five: What do you want?
I love drunk Nick, he's a lovable douche!
Oh sweet Jesus...“Well, you look beautiful,” he said, his voice sending goosebumps across her skin. She could almost swear his voice would be enough to get her off – it was that attractive. I felt that!!
Boyfriend Joe!!! Oh god I'd love to read that!
Such a great story, I definitely chose the right one to re-immerse myself in!
AHHH! Hi, Aisling! I'm so happy you're back on JBFA. You always gave me motivation to write and it looks like you're back at it! Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter. You're the absolute best!! :)
Date: 06/20/2020 07:40 AM Title: Part Four: You don't have to stay
Oh my god that was perfection! So fecking cute!! I loved this chapter so much! Nice to see a softer side to him and a little bit of vulnerability peeking through. Waking up next to Joe on Christmas morning is the dream! So perfect. Loved it!
Date: 06/20/2020 07:29 AM Title: Part Three: Three's A Charm
Oh Joseph... don't be a dick! I did feel very proud of her for basically wanting to tell him to fuck off! I could really feel her pain!
That Halloween scene though... that was everything. Joe in a cop costume... yes please! So electrifying!
I love this!
Date: 06/18/2020 08:30 AM Title: Part Five: What do you want?
First of all, drunk Nick was everything lmao.
HOLYMOLY, I ENJOYED 12 AM SO MUCH! It was such a perfect ending for Maya and Joe... And how he told her about his feelings aaah, I almost died haha.
I love your stories, Lisa!
Haha I love drunk Nick too! I'm glad you liked it so much! Thank you!!!!
Date: 06/18/2020 01:13 AM Title: Part One: The illustrious Joe Jonas
Okay first of ...Are you thinking of making a part II or an epilogue of this? Cause this story was SOOO GOOODD!
Second, You had me feeling like The Notebook and Gilmore Girls during the WHOLE chapter......omg seriously, I felt like a teenager again. I loved that Joe was like: ''Okay I can be your boyfriend'' and I was like: NO WAYYYYYYYY BE MY BOYFRIEND and then he was honest as fuck about he doesnt know what to be in lav is and I wanted SO BAD to teach him! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA but it's okay, Maya will do the job.
Again.. amazing story bae !
I hadn't thought about writing any more for this story. And you're right, it does have The Notebook vibes. The "what do you want?" part in the Notebook is my absolute favorite part, I had to add it in a story. Haha. I'm so happy you liked the story! I really challenged myself to write a short story that was only five chapters long, because most of my stories are freaking novels at this point. Anyway....... Thanks for the review, Jay! Love yoooouuu!!!
Date: 06/16/2020 09:26 PM Title: Part One: The illustrious Joe Jonas
This was my first read since rejoining and it has been such a good way to start! This story makes my heart race lol. I couldn't stop reading while I was supposed to be working (a perk of working from home during quarantine?). Can't wait to read how it ends!
Aww, that's awesome. I'm honored that this story was your first! <3
Date: 06/13/2020 02:34 AM Title: Part Four: You don't have to stay
OMG. There's so many feelings between them it's insane, I cannot wait for the last part!!!
I can't wait to share the last part! Thanks for all your reviews! You're the best!