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Reviewer: Nickyanka4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2020 03:20 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Plan

Awesome story!!! I can't wait for the sequal.

Reviewer: Sunflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2020 03:58 PM Title: Chapter Three: The Jonas'

Yeah, seems like Nick feels ashamed and doesn't want her to know he went to school with her. I can see why :D I'm surprised he didn't comment on her choice of music to sing along to. I was already preparing for an akward encounter with the guys.

And I totally get weird logic holes in old stories. But those old stories carry a lot of memories. I was just sorting through some of my old writing earlier and I've been in a weird mood of nostalgia and excitement since.

I'm looking forward to Jaz and Joe meeting again.

Reviewer: Sunflower Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2020 09:52 AM Title: Chapter Two: The Home

I wonder when they will figure out they went to kindergarten together. Also, didn't she catch the full name somtime during their time together years ago? Or recognize Nick and Joe in her favourite band? On the other hand, who would think they could know "stars"?



Author's Response:

I totally get what you're saying haha

When I wrote this, I totally didn't think of things like that, I was only 13 hahaha

Thank you for reading though!  Next chapter is coming out now!

Reviewer: BeckyJonas Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2020 08:58 AM Title: Chapter One: The Milk and Cookies

Look forward to reading more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Third chapter is about to go up!

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