Penname: cityseducti0n [Contact] Real name: Sabrina
Member Since: 05/23/2020
Membership status: Member

Excited to be here again! I can't wait to share my writing. 

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Crazy Summer Nights


He’s my brother’s best friend and I’ve had a huge crush on him since I was ten years old. 

Now I’m about to turn eighteen and he just graduated college. I barely saw him over the past few years, but I remember how giddy his presence made me feel – how giddy he still makes me feel. 

And it especially doesn’t help that my brother invited him to spend the summer with us in California. 

A summer together. That’s all we have before he leaves.

One last summer. 

Categories: Jonas Brothers > Friendship, Jonas Brothers > Drama, Jonas Brothers > Romance
Characters: Joe Jonas, O/c Character
Series: Forbidden
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34929 Read Count: 8430
[Report This] Published: 05/23/2020 Updated: 06/06/2020
Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/04/2020 Title: Chapter 1: May 16, 2010

I a in love. Reminds me a little of Jenny Han's "The Summer I Turned Pretty" and I can't wait to delve into it! Her description of Joe has me kicking my own damn lips. 😋

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it :D

ohh I will have to check that out!! I only read the To All The Boys series of hers so far. 

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/04/2020 Title: Chapter 2: June 20, 2010

Jos to the rescue! Woot woot! If I could I would smack Iona for Ruby, seriously! And those guys were assholes. Thank God Joe was there. I can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/04/2020 Title: Chapter 3: July 3, 2010

Have mercy. I'm loving this. The built up sexual tension is everything!!!

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/04/2020 Title: Chapter 4: July 4, 2010

Freaking Emma.  I suddenly hate that name. I don't but I don't like her at all. Stealing Ruby's potential and forbidden man. Eff that. Let's drown her! Obviously I'm fired up for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/04/2020 Title: Chapter 5: July 4, 2010

YES! The tension! I love it. This is pure gold!

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/05/2020 Title: Chapter 6: July 10, 2010

WTF. She better get her some birthday sex. Lord. That had me sweating! That's an amazing gift tho. 

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/05/2020 Title: Chapter 7: July 11, 2010

Girl. I'm emotional. This made me super emotional and I love that I feel what she's feeling through your writing. The angst. 

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it :D thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/07/2020 Title: Chapter 8: July 14, 2010

But why are they so cuuuuute. Ugh. If only they didn't have to hide. 

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/11/2020 Title: Chapter 9: July 17, 2010

When will is more my question but BOY the guilt! 

Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 06/12/2020 Title: Chapter 10: July 18, 2010

FINALLY. Goodbye Emma. I never liked you. 

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Ambition put Harper in the wrong place at the wrong time...


Now she's fighting for her life with someone who wasn't supposed to be more then a paycheck...

Categories: Jonas Brothers, Jonas Brothers > Crime, Jonas Brothers > Drama
Characters: Joe Jonas, Kevin Jonas, O/c Character
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63238 Read Count: 6184
[Report This] Published: 05/26/2020 Updated: 07/16/2020
Reviewer: cityseducti0n Signed
Date: 05/29/2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: The Concert

1. I want her grilled cheese. 

2. I love the premise of this story. 

3. I'm excited to ready more. 

It's so different from what would normally be found on the site and makes me want to post my crime drama, Shake It Out. If I hadn't changed names and tried to make it non-fanfic. Excited to continue this!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it. It was honestly probably my favorite of all my JB stories I ever wrote (other then the ones I feel squicky about re-posting now 'cause Garbo ain't in the band anymore - and therefore isn't really even a slightly public figure). And I'm super excited to work on it again - and have ideas for continuance of it now (of course I do). It's complete...but well you'll see. It has potential to go more places now that I've had 10 years (jesus) to stew on it.

The irony - the intention when I finished this story originally was always to take it down and revise and expand it - into a real story. 'Cause JB in this are The Jonas Brothers but at the same time, it's such a "non-factor" beyond "Hey...famous wealthy pop star" that I thought I could do that. Then the email address I registered with Mibba on got hacked and I lost it. And Mibba has like zero tech support (Less now then they even did years ago) and have never responded to my requests of every six months (still) to remove my stories from their site. Even with a, "Yea...we have no way to believe you are actually the person who wrote these. So we can't do that." reply. So unless I can get it re-worked properly, and then get a publisher to write a firm "cease and desist before we sue" letter. *shrug* I just figured it wasn't worth any hassle to try anymore.