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Summary:

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Suffocated by the people and the place she grew up in, Avery thought university would be the chance to start anew. Enter Nick Jonas, the one anchor to everything Avery was trying to escape. Unfortunately for her, he's not a weight so easily removed.

 

It started out as a joke, telling each other how much they hated one another with 3 simple numbers: 1 4 3. That 4-letter word that she'd expressed to Nick so much was starting to change. It was starting to become a very different 4-letter word.

AU


Previously featured story on JBFA 1.0, and winner of Best Comedy in JBFA awards 2013

 


Categories: Jonas Brothers, Jonas Brothers > Friendship, Jonas Brothers > Angst, Jonas Brothers > Drama, Jonas Brothers > Humor, Jonas Brothers > Romance
Characters: Nick Jonas, O/c Character
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117088 Read Count: 12939
[Report This] Published: 05/24/2020 Updated: 11/20/2020
Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1

Awww I've missed this story so much!! I finally have the time to read it! Damn I haven't read it in soooo long hahhaa but I'm so excited to again! I can't wait to read again about Avery and Nick!! So exciting I used to love this story! hahaha

Also when I read the names Tyler and Mark I nearly died lmaoooo just so happens that that's my ex's and his best friend's name LMAO anyway tho hahhaa.



Author's Response:

Very different from YOUR Avery and Nick lol - well so far anyway. 

I didn't even know you'd read any of this previously. So... welcome back! haha

That's so funny that the names reminded you of people. I love when that happens though! Hope this story will bring better nostalgic things out for you :P

Thanks!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2

Ugh I forgot how much I missed Nick and Avery! Ugh so cute! Avery def is holding onto that hatred for Nick lolol but the enddddd ughhhh, giving me the feels again! hahaha Nick's such a smartass but I love it hahaha



Author's Response:

Avery will NEVER let go of the hatred. never. Nick will give it right back to her though! If only to see her more frustrated haha

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3

Ahhhh I love all the pranks! I remembered loving the prank war from Avery and Nick!



Author's Response:

Oh and it's only just begun! I had literally forgotten most of the pranks that happened between them until I started reposting this lol

Thanks!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4

oh my godddd I remember this prank!!! hahhaa I fucking love Avery and Nick's little relationship! Damn, Nick is straight evil tho. Making her think that he was actually pissed off! smh hahaha 



Author's Response:

Nick can be evil, yes, but Avery can be even more so! She's relentless. She won't let anything he does go unpunished!

Silly kids and their silly pranks :P

Thanks!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5

omgggg yessss!!! Nick asked her out! About fucking time! I love them haha



Author's Response:

LOL he asked her out. Yeah... might be awhile before we hear about that again :P

If it took them this long to get this far, just imagine how long until they actually make plans to go on the date haha

Thanks!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6

How has it been 14 DAYS since Nick asked her out and nothing was ever brought up again! Ughhh. Also, it seems like Tyler likes Avery, she wants him to like her I think, but of course her head's sooooo wrapped around Nick that she doesn't even know she likes Nick lmao. Godddd hahaha

I love their pranks though! Avery loves pissing Nick off hahaha



Author's Response:

Because they're both so stubborn! And hilariously shy about it. The date WILL come up again though. Promise.

Tyler DOES like Avery ;) Avery likes a distraction from Nick...or something to take her mind off of what she might be feeling towards him when she's already sworn to hate him for the rest of her life ;P

Avery pissing Nick off is her favourite pastime haha

Thanks
Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/15/2020 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7

Oh my god LOL the Lady Gaga costume and the iPod mention haha it's a geek to read haha since it's just a lil outdated lmaooo

But I love the story! Too bad Tyler was too drunk to pay much attention to Avery though, but Nick's alwayssss carefully watching her ;) Ave is blind as hellllll tho, Nick clearly likes her! smh and I'm sure everyone knows!!!

I can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

I completely must have skimmed over the iPod mention when I reread it. Or I'm that old and it didn't even phase me to read it haha

I've been swimming in nostalgia rereading this story. I wrote it while I was in uni, and a bunch of stuff that happened to me there made it into the story! Just little things, but it's so funny to read about them again

The lady gaga costume had me actually LOL'ing though. GEEEEEEEZ.

Maybe Tyler is just as dumb as Nick and Avery about what he was expected to do haha Poor Avery.

But yes, Avery is literally stupid and blind haha

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 07/27/2020 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15

Oh my GODDDDD!!! Avery is an idiot!!! Did she really just..... do this.... like what the fuckkkkk.

She's so indenial about her feelings for Nick and so stubborn to change that she won't admit to herself that she definitely has feelings for her. And Nick 100% is trying soooo hard but she's so fucking stubborn! Ugh I'm not happy with her right now! haha. And ugh Tyler.... of course he fucks it up! Well, he prob does like her but like... everyone knows Nick likes Avery and shit!

Now Nick's mad and Avery's in deeeeep shit haha

Still love the chapter tho!



Author's Response:

PREACH!

I think i've said Avery is an idiot in more than 75% of my author's responses haha

She's had these deep - actually kinda unfounded - beliefs about the person that Nick is and how she feels about him for SO LONG, that she's having a lot of trouble reworking them lol. 

Nick tries... he tries to plan a lot out whether it be what prank he's pulling next, or how he's going to act to Avery or whatever, but things cannot be planned like that! They both are kinda stubborn in that way. She's stubborn being oblivious, and he's stubborn thinking he's got everything under control when CLEARLY he does not.

So Nick flips out because his plan didn't work out... again. :P

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 08/04/2020 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16

Oh my god FINALLY! It took her THIS long to figure out that she has feelings for Nick!!! Goddd Avery. Only been months now! But at least she realized it. Hopefully Joe isn't teaching Nick anything bad or whatever! Loved the texts at the end hahaha Nick just infuriates her so much. And I hope they get together really soon! :D



Author's Response:

What can I say? Avery is an idiot in denial. BUT AREN'T WE SO GLAD SHE FINALLY REALIZED?! lol

Hopefully Joe is a good boy, and hopefully Avery doesn't start thinking too hard about it and get paranoid about not knowing what Nick is doing without her around ... ;)

It's not the end for them and all the fighting! Stay tuned lol. They'll always be fighting about something haha

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 08/11/2020 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17

Oh my godddd. This chapter! Nick avoiding Avery smh but i can't blame him. She really did bring this to herself with her dumbness! And denial! Nick probably needs some time but damnnnn SHE KISSED HIM FIRST THIS TIME! Fucking finally!!! But as I'd expect, she ran away from him! Well now I need Nick to chase her downnnn hahaha

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Nick can be a little moody bitch sometimes too. haha but like i've said like a million times before, I completely agree with you about her being dumb. :P

She DID actually kiss him first. This is kinda monumental. She's finally opening her eyes!! Yes, she ran away, but Nick wasn't quite... elated? His response was... nothing. guess we'll see!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/20/2020 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9

Well damnnnnn, Avery really got Nick vulnerable with that prank! Although it wasn't nearly as "good" as Nick's, she hit him where it hurts hardest haha. Nick's prank was just plain mean tho! Still haven''t forgiven him for what he did to Avery! That was such a low on his end tbh.

Butttttt at least we know more about Nick and his backstory! His upbringing seems to put a lot of pressure on him haha can't wait to see more soon!

Also, THE DATE!! yes! can someone please bring it up again! because we want to see their date D A T E!!!! Just sayinnnnn hahhaa



Author's Response:

Yes. She might not have been quite as cruel as Nick had seemingly unknowingly been, but she still made sure it packed a punch. What does Nick love? school and baseball. BOOM. Target acquired lol.

Nick's prank was cruel. I agree. He got a little carried away with the whole 'let's see how angry I can get Avery and make it funny' bit. Thankfully, this kinda sparks a truce between them. Well for pranks anyway.

Hah! The date. A tiny itsy bitsy mention of it... but still kinda swept under the rug. It'll come. I swear.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Really appreciate it :)

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 07/21/2020 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14

Oh my god. FINALLYYY!! THEY MADE OUT!

And Avery still says "maybe he doesn't hate her as much as she thought?" REALLY????!!!! omg she is clueless and indenial that she's fallen for her sworn enemy hahaha. God I can't wait for them to actually get together and actually discuss their feelings for each other!

Also I can't believe Avery almost went to kiss someone else! Thank god nick didn't let that happen! :D

Loved the chapter so much! 



Author's Response:

YES! FINALLY! lmao. talk about a slow build. These characters are kinda.... kinda sorta maybe big idiots. lol

HAH! it took this long for them to make out, don't get to thinking they've suddenly hit the gas pedal on talking about their feelings and progressing together really fast. It's frustrating, i know. haha

Oh yeah. Huh. I kinda forgot about her thinking about kissing someone else. IMAGINE!!! that would've been something else haha

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Ivy!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 06/26/2020 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11

Oh my godddd, THE KISS FROM TYLER?!!!????!!!! damn that was smooth. But Nick must be pissed as HELLLLLL. And Avery is sooooo clueless! Obviously Nick likes her! A lot! I'm pretttyyyy sure Tyler had backed off for a while to give Nick the space to win Avery over but obviouslyyyy that's taken way too long so he's back in the picture!

Gah, can Avery wake up and realize Nick! Has! Feelings! For! Her!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Tyler is a man with a plan! Sending her off home with a goodbye like THAT?! Genius.

Avery's dumb, I agree haha and you are pretty much RIGHT ON POINT with your predictions about Tyler haha 

Avery will get it... one day.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Really appreciate it!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 10/24/2020 Title: Chapter 25: ch25

omg I just caught up again and OH MY GODDDD I REALLY HAD TO END HERE ON THIS CLIFFHANGER!!!!

First I was like omg yessss Avery and Nick are together... then they HAD SEX!!! But then.... AVERY SNOOPED THROUGH NICK'S PHONE AND FOUND ALL THIS OUT!!!

I HAVE SO MANY MIXED EMOTIONS!!!!

Okay first, Nick's choice of words was definitely poor. Veryyyyyy poor. But I think Avery's own insecurities were taking over there and she was definitely overthinking.

Also, for her to snoop on Nick's phone was a bigggggggg no no. Like idk they just got together and she's already going through his phone looking for something wrong!!!

But anyways, yeah, what the FUCK did NICK DO?!?! THAT SHADY MF

Okay tbh, they weren't together so Avery can't get mad at that but Nick ughhhh he still lied about it! that asshole!!! But also they really really need to talk.

Which leads me to: AVERY BETTER NOT DO ANYTHING STUPID WITH TYLER!!!! pleaseeeeee do not kiss or touch him anymore than she already has! omg it's gonna make nick soooo fucking mad holy shitttttt. I can't wait for the shit show!!!!

Okay I'm done now hahaha. Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 08/24/2020 Title: Chapter 19: Ch19

Oh shitttttt! I wonder what Nick got himself into! But I have to say that I am sooooo happy Nick and Avery made so much progress with their relationship! Yesssss!!!

It's about time that they've confessed their feelings and are kissing out in the open!

Also I hope Nick didn't do anything stupid in Jersey. We'll see 'bout that!

As for Tyler, he's soooo old news now lmao.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Nick has done something... something Avery doesn't like. Hmm... is there anything new here? lol it could be ANYTHING!

I'm soooo happy that they figuring a few things out too! Progress is happening! Hopefully they keep their feet on the gas pedal :P

Jersey... is a thing. It's a thing that will haunt Avery a little for a while yet. She's not letting go of it, but is also too scared to bring it up out of the blue! Hah. Might pose a problem for her.

Tyler is old news... but he's still in the next chapter! haha Hope he doesn't cause any problems :P

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 08/31/2020 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20

Ahhhh Avery and Nick are so cute! Their bickering gives me lifeeee hahaha. Avery is sooo god damn stubborn! Love the part when Nick was like "you're kind of a bitch" lmaooo was the last thing I expected in that moment!

But damn the ice skating rink part was soooo awkward with that tension between Tyler and Avery. Well, Tyler didn't even make anything of it. But Nick was defffff jealous. So obvious haha.

But the ending I think Avery was being sooooo dramatic! No need to go all the way home and get mad at Nick for his stunt haha. Although it was a Dick move I def don't think he meant for it to go that far.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

They are cute, but they defintely keep it real between the two of them. Even if she (or rather both of them) is/are completely stubborn, they don't sugar coat things for one another. 

Avery wouldn't have been Avery if it wasn't at least a little bit awkward between her and Tyler lol. Tyler was more into trying to smooth things over between the two of them so they could continue being friends. But I wouldn't put it past him to try to still get under Nick's skin a little...which he totally did haha

Avery may have been a little dramatic, but like... she legit got injured. For something stupid. Her and Nick are both a little stupid, what else is new? haha

thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Mandy

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 09/09/2020 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21

Oh my god!! Avery and Nick! hahaha they are such a stubborn pairing! Geez, but there is some sexual tension that must get squashed at some point! haha but I'm just glad they never stay too mad at each other for too long!

It was so cute Avery cheered Nick on for once! And he def loved it! But damn, this boy's jealousy issues! Not only that but he's soooo competative too! Not exactly a good combo. He's just gotta chilllll out a bit!

At the end I seriously thought Nick was mad at Avery for talking to Tyler but I'm glad it was just to lead her away to makeout ;) hahaha

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Easing sexual tension needed, you say? Hmm. They're definitely still getting on each others' nerves but it just doesn't seem to be in the same way that it used to be, does it? Somethings changed. Hopefully for the better ;)

Hopefully nick can find a way to chill out with the competitive jealousy bit...before it really causes more trouble than just another simple screaming match between the two of them. 

Nick can be sneaky sometimes...even just to piss her off more lol

thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Really appreciate it

mandy 

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 11/17/2020 Title: Chapter 26: Ch26

Oh my god!!! TYLER IS AN ASSHOLE! I knew this would happen! He definitely doesn't have good intentions with Avery if he acts like such a piece of shit every time she doesn't wanna do anything with him! He's definitely no friend smh.

But wow there was just a lot to unpack after this chapter! Charlie liked Avery!!! Hmmm interesting.... but goddd so much miscommunication!! She needs to get in touch asap! And I HOPE HE DOESN'T JUST LEAVE!

Also, she WOULD just say one four three to Nick on the voicemail! But what a perfect ending in Avery style hahaha

Also, only ONE MORE CHAPTER!??????!!!! Noooo I'm gonna miss these two :(

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 11/22/2020 Title: Chapter 27: Ch27

Oh my goddd!!! I can't believe it! They're finally together! Gahhh the ending was sooo cute and perfect :) I'm so glad Nick didn't leave and he's commiting himself to her! But I was also sooo happy to hear that Nick punched Tyler hahaha he got what was coming!!! That was longggg overdued! Tyler was suchhh a dick and I can't believe he almost tried something again!

I'm just so glad they're together at last :) But also 2 weeks is such a long time I don't think I coild wait like them to confront each other LOL

Also, I DEF need to see the one shot of them! I need all the Navery I can get!!!

Amazing story! Loved it soooo much, so glad you reposted it :) 

Summary:

All This Time

 

Sequel to Crazy Summer Nights.

As a senior in college, with the foresight of a first job right after graduation, Ruby Montgomery's life seems to be right on track. 

That is until an old acquaintance turns up again and shakes up her entire world, pulling her off course and putting her seemingly bright future at risk.


Categories: Jonas Brothers, Jonas Brothers > Drama, Jonas Brothers > Romance
Characters: Joe Jonas, O/c Character
Series: Forbidden
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34107 Read Count: 7105
[Report This] Published: 06/07/2020 Updated: 11/02/2020
Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 07/27/2020 Title: Chapter 9: Nine

Oh shitttttttt. Ruby is digging herself into a hole!!! This is v bad. She needs to call off the engagement with Matt because ughhhh the cheating!!!! I wanna ship Joe and her again so bad but UGH she needs to call things off with Matt so she can be happy in love with Joe again!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 07/21/2020 Title: Chapter 8: Eight

So I just caught up on this story and I love it so so so so soooo much! It's so good!

On one hand, I'm cheering for Joe and Ruby, but ughhshfhshg he did her dirty and she def deserves better. Just sayinnngg. But it seems like Matt is an asshole and too busy with work and all. And the whole status thing... oof. I can already tell this isn't going to be pretty!

But Ruby highkey just cheated on her fiance. Not good at all. :////

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: dasweetie Signed
Date: 09/29/2020 Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

Oh my GODDDDD I cannot believe this. First, I THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING THERE TO BREAK UP WITH HIM!!! Well, I guess she did in a way but not what I expected!!!!! Holy shittttt. But wow, of course totally saw this coming. He only wanted to merge their companies and followed his dad's orders. Wow. Well, at least Ruby will now go back to Joe!!! Fucking finally! I hope they work out this time around!!!